SwITcH

I admit, the art is very adorable and well done~! The first time I critiqued your artwork, (yes, the one Rin and Gumi swapped clothes) it was so adorable and is adored by a lot of deviants from here. To start off, here are my observations:

Fist, the coloring technique you used is amazing and fit for the adorable art. its kinda like a mixed media type. The way you color the girls makes the artwork lively.

Second, the concept of the artwork was so original. Like I said bbefore, I never expected that you got the idea of swapping the VOCALOID girls clothes. When you swapped their style, you made them look that they were an another character. (For example, Miku's hair wasn't in pigtails since it was Rin's style to let her hair loose and Rin having cute pigtails)

The things to improve here are the clothes. Remember, Miku is kinda big and tall. So, when you swap it with Rin's, it should be kinda loose. the same goes for Rin's. Oh, you forgot the headphones of Rin and Miku~!

But overall, the artwork was a obra maestra~! A masterpiece to behold~! Keep up the good work!