Entry For Sparkly Personify Contest! more info > [link]
I had to choose a color and personify it. the reason i chose this color orange/yellow is because it just makes me happy and fruity feeling! wat kind of feeling is that?. Its a color of my favorite fruits (pineapple, mango, orange, and lemon(as a lemonade and putting on food)) it also reminds me of the most beautiful thing in the universe, Sun. its one of my favorite color too~ and it reminds me of my favorite vocaloid rin-chan~ yea she's rite there!
and oh yea there is error in the drawing... ice never sinks.....IT FLOATS!!! WHY DID I SANK IT!!!
<Material Used> A4 Copy Paper Sakura Color Pencil (24) Sharpie Fine Tip Pen
<Copyright> Rin Kagamine [Vocaloid] (c) Crypton Drawing (c) =LitsteningMusic Orange (c) God
for me, this is very cute ^^ and it clearly express how much rin loves oranges! >< and you make a good use os the colours, principally the orange of course (and i like how you experiment and make such beautifull backgrounds! ><) just some details, like: in the background notes some white spaces in the orange, and like you just said, "the ice never sinks, it floats" but, beyond that, it´s like all your artworks, so colorfull and creative, maybe you just use a few colors, but still looks so full of life, (could be said) in brief, beatiful artwork and now i just can say: " good luck with the contest! ^^"
I love your drawings, and I both agree and disagree with the Critique. You shouldn't think that if the orange isn't fully colored in so perfectly, it is a flaw. Or that ice sinking is flaw. But you might as well do your best!
well it happens sometimes but in theory, it does not sink lol like there are some water that never freeze and when u hit them, they just freeze instantly
just some details, like: in the background notes some white spaces in the orange, and like you just said, "the ice never sinks, it floats"
in brief, beatiful artwork and now i just can say: " good luck with the contest! ^^"
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