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July 4, 2013
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IceCream by Colorful--Melody IceCream by Colorful--Melody
long time no posting >A<
hope u like it ^^

A4 paper
staedtler triplus fine liner
mitsubishi colored pencil no.880

left two characters (c) =Colorful--Melody
right two characters (c) =MikiClover
drawing (c) =Colorful--Melody
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first, thanks for drawing this ;u; your mini chibis are insanely cute lol
im not still used to giving critique so bear with me ;v;

Vision: Colorfulness in your work is your thing lol you are colorful--melody after all. color choice is really eye catching and its just really fitting for this happy theme. You mixed up ice treats well in each position with mine and your characters. what first comes into my eye is Yuu-kun lol. you drew him in perfect position! all i want to say is that each character is drawn perfectly with their character.
every time you give me a critique, you say same thing here so i shall also say that to you too. half of them is my character so it does not make this art completely original. and the idea for drawing these 4 was mine too lol. but how you display them is completely your own. especially with Yuu-kun.
you shaded each of the character's hair very well though they were so tiny >w< but sadly you dont have great editing skill for this colorpencil art so you lost most of light colors on your ice cream but that actually made those chibis pop up more in the canvas so i guess it worked out well at last.
though there are some problems, this work has enough impact to impress others ;u; so dont have to worry about impact!! but comparing with other works from yours, this may lack in impact because scanner killed the color so u lose half a star.

overall, nothing is wrong about your work but you sorta lack in editing.
maybe thats one thing you want to work on for the next masterpiece ^^
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ugh, i just finished writing a critique for this and my computer decided to rage quit on me a shut down, so i have to start over.

there is one thing i can say when i see this, ITS FREAKING ADORABLE, the colors are so vivid, and the details, wow. it feels like i'm in candy land when i see this i feel i'm in candy land. this is the kind of picture i want on my wall. these chibis are ridiculously adorable... but i need to give them some advice. *leans down to chibi size* guys, don't stand in the ice cream... its for eating, it will make your clothes all sticky!
haha, anyway. happy drawing! you could make it big in the artist world!
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frappy-chan00 Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love very much the icecreams and i love also this drawing!! :iconawwwplz:
Colorful--Melody Sep 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you frappy-chan <3 i just wanna eat some icecream >< is your place hot?
frappy-chan00 Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ehm.... what? :heart: :heart:
Colorful--Melody Sep 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
my place is still so warm >U</ is your place hot too?
Colorful--Melody Aug 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you! >U</
Lyona-dono Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how it is so vibrant ; it almost looks like it's moving !
The background is awesome too~!
Colorful--Melody Aug 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
aww im so happy to hear that >U</
thank you very much~
Lyona-dono Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ! :D
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