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My best digital work so far >A</ i was playing around with textures and layer setting
i played around too much, some of the shading became hard to recognize lol XD
but im really proud of this personally!! ;v; they are my oc Couples~<3 hope you like it~
<Material>
Photoshop CS5
textures: [link] [link] [link] [link]
thank you for letting me use them! >U</
<Copyright>
Drawing (c) =Colorful--Melody
leftDyea Shinryou (c) =Colorful--Melody
rightZhou Seikyou (c) =Colorful--Melody
i played around too much, some of the shading became hard to recognize lol XD
but im really proud of this personally!! ;v; they are my oc Couples~<3 hope you like it~
<Material>
Photoshop CS5
textures: [link] [link] [link] [link]
thank you for letting me use them! >U</
<Copyright>
Drawing (c) =Colorful--Melody
leftDyea Shinryou (c) =Colorful--Melody
rightZhou Seikyou (c) =Colorful--Melody
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2550x3300px 987.15 KB
© 2013 - 2024 Colorful--Melody
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Since It's a personal preference, I like how you used warm colors for this artwork; it managed to give a bright, colorful, and lively feeling to it. I may have been able to appreciate it more if you also did the background and avoided using ready-made textures and brushes. Though I must say, it does fit well with both of the characters -- they look like stars who just finished a live performance!
As for the anatomy, you need to work on drawing hands. Zhou's right hand is drawn from a wrong perspective, and it should be a tad more bigger. His thumb on the left hand also looks dislocated; they shouldn't have been bent that way. The same goes for his ring and pinky finger. Dyea's right hand needs to be bigger as well so it would be in proportion to her overall size. To give it a little twist, I feel that it would have been better if she held onto Zhou's jacket, or at least had her hand opened. Zhou's right arm also needs some work. It's either you failed to draw the right foreshortening (elbow to wrist) or you should have drawn it in a different position; his arms comfortably put around her with his hands dangling open.
Other than those, everything else is fine. You may also need to work on pen-pressure. They look too stiff with solid lines like that. You should practice on which areas should the line be thinner or thicker. The proper application of pen-pressure will give your artwork more flow, smoothness, and life. And before I forget, I absolutely love how you colored his shirt and jacket. You also do a pretty fine job at drawing wrinkles in clothes. Keep up the great work! Your style is lovely and I can't wait to see it evolve into something more beautiful with every improvement you achieve ♥